I took Wednesday evening off writing to spend some QT with my husband for our anniversary. (Hey, he decided not to correct papers, so it was a fair trade off.)
I've yet to write the conversation I have Carlisle and Edward engage in at the beginning of the chapter, but I have written Edward and Rosalie's confrontation at the end. I feel the need to redraft it because I'm worried that Carlisle is coming off as too passive. He is, after all, the "hero" of the story. As I said in the last blog, originally I didn't intend for Carlisle to be there for it at all. It is essential that Rosalie hooks Edward into her new mission, and that Carlisle has to let them make their own decisions.
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