Monday, October 4, 2010

I wrote more of Rosalie and Edward's confrontation in Chapter Eleven last night. It's good, but it doesn't fully satisfy, as I'm still missing some elements that I wish to put in. Originally I hadn't envisioned that Carlisle would be there to witness it, but then I realized it would be completely out of character for him to not give chase as well. I'm going to have to take advantage of Rosalie's newborn speed, Edward's faster-than-your-average-vampire speed, and their ability to quick talk conversation in mere seconds.

"Give chase?" What do I mean by "give chase?" Well, I guess you'll have to wait for the chapter on that one.

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